Sample diagnostic report

Orchard After Rain

pacing · COMPLETED

Issues
1
High
0
Medium
1
Low
0

Overall diagnostic summary

Structured diagnostic report generated. Original manuscript text was not changed.

Report disclaimer
Findings are diagnostic review items, not editorial decisions or assessments of literary quality. Severity and confidence indicate review priority and certainty.

Severity and confidence scales

Severity indicates possible impact if the finding is valid. Confidence indicates how certain the diagnostic scan is that the issue is present.

Severity = impact

Low: minor review item. Medium: notable continuity, pacing, or structure concern. High: potentially significant contradiction or logic issue.

Confidence = certainty

Low: weak evidence. Medium: visible pattern with possible context. High: strong textual or measurable evidence.

Issues by category

Pacing Diagnostics

Severity: MediumConfidence: High (81%)Chapter 18: County Records

Long section relative to manuscript average

This chapter is more than twice the manuscript's average chapter length and contains extended document review before the next family confrontation.

What does this mean?
Evidence / text area
Chapter/section: Chapter 18: County Records
Location: Estimated pages 196-214; Section-level signal
5,940 words in section
2,320 words average detected chapter length
The chapter includes courthouse arrival, clerk conversation, deed search, lien search, tax map review, and a copied letter.
Diagnostic next step

Consider whether the research sequence needs subdivision, compression, or a stronger scene turn.

How to review this
  1. Read the cited section beside the chapters before and after it.
  2. Identify whether the pace should feel fast, slow, reflective, tense, or transitional.
  3. Adjust scene length, paragraph density, summary, or transitions only where the actual rhythm fights the intended rhythm.

Mark intentional if the rhythm serves the scene, ignore if the signal does not affect reading flow, or mark for correction if the section needs a pacing pass.

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